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Anthem's Fall

Anthem's Fall

362K Reads 14.1K Votes 81 Part Story
S.L. Dunn By SLDunn Updated Feb 16

The young emperor Vengelis Epsilon narrowly escapes the reckoning of his empire at the hands of strange machines known as Felixes. The Felixes are identical in every respect to the godlike men of Vengelis's world save for their mechanical blue eyes. Feared to be indestructible, the wanton holocaust of the Felix appears inescapable. His family murdered and his empire maimed under a shadow of destruction, Vengelis pursues the pained final words of his dying mentor, and sets course for a remote and unchartered world-our world.

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Not bad. Although you write a little unclear, are you inconcise about the details? I haven't considered that it was deliberate, and that this was possibly like a broadcast. If it was that was very clever.
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TheEpicOfTheReadera TheEpicOfTheReadera Nov 29, 2016
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baby_jaee8 baby_jaee8 Nov 14, 2015
Maybe instead of waylaid you could use delayed. You don't want to use something that implicates they permanently saved Anthem because you just introduced to the read another problem. So delayed sounds more in tune and "real-time" with the story
theamazingjoham theamazingjoham Jul 27, 2015
I like the mysterious tone you added into it. Makes me feel as lost as everyone else in the story.
AlyssaFernandez7 AlyssaFernandez7 Apr 28, 2015
An empire in devastation. I love your style. I've been searching for something other than Star Wars novels to read and I'm to have stumbled upon this story.