Indigo Initiate

Indigo Initiate

842 Reads 86 Votes 15 Part Story
Manik Sharma By IndigoFox212 Updated 4 hours ago

Indigo Initiate is a story about the duality of ambition and the lust for power. The story begins with the exploration of our closest satellite, the Moon, and how the establishment of the lunar base goes awry as first contact with extraterrestrial life is made with varying consequences.  

This is a story that explores the mind, dreams and virtual reality through a lens of  science-fiction and the human capacity for corruption and greatness.

  • 2018undiscovered1k
  • adventure
  • alien
  • diverse
  • dream
  • expoloration
  • fantasy
  • fiction
  • futuristic
  • mystery
  • non-linear
  • politics
  • power
  • psychological
  • reality
  • science
  • science-fantasy
  • science-fiction
  • space
  • spiritual
  • subconcious
  • technology
  • virtual
  • vr
knotanumber knotanumber Dec 12, 2018
Earthling sounds retro sci-fi. Why not just humans? Also, some phrases like "used all their might" are too overstated.
bxthechx bxthechx Dec 07, 2018
Remember to show and not tell though, telling is not always terrible but perhaps sprinkling in the answers can make the readers more interested, either way
katerauner katerauner Dec 06, 2018
Nice hint here that Earth is ruined - the hint is better than a long description for me, so I can get into the story easily
Katarina0724 Katarina0724 Dec 06, 2018
Whatever has happened to earth, it's probably pretty accurate to real life 😂
TechieInAK TechieInAK Jan 02
I'm thinking you probably mean "Crew morale" here instead of "moral"
knotanumber knotanumber Dec 12, 2018
Awkward paragraph. First you introduce the crew without introducing them then have them build a homemade space can and then throw in an inspirational flashback. There's nothing wrong with inspirational moments but make them unique and memorable.