Allie was the new girl, also the only girl he talked to. Who? You may ask well he's famous, I'll tell you that. If you want to know who he exactly is you'll just have to read to find out. Read right now 'The New Girl.'
okay! its good so far just separate the dialogue from the paragraph, try to describe the characters, im not trying to be rude srry if I am!! but aside from this its good!!