Short stories for you :)
The conversational style drew me in, and the "This is how my dog died" part (unexpected given the lighthearted style of the narrator) is a good hook. The story also makes an interesting reflection on how horrible things can be done innocently.
Hahahahaha. Im laughing at you Alice`s dad☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️ha
In the beginning didn't you say you were 10? oh wait, nevermind, 4 years ago.. haha
I hate to advertise and be rude, but would some of you guys be willing to check out my story I posted? thanks!
I don't think I should have read this as a bedtime story for my little brother …
A six years old deciding to live unhappily ever after...not acceptable ...even if it's fiction.