Grandfather Saved By God

Grandfather Saved By God

872 Reads 21 Votes 4 Part Story
Someone By Imaginationismylife Updated Mar 19, 2011

A girl named Ally had a perfect life until her grandfather was diagnosed with stomach cancer. From then on nothing was the same. 
I am a 13 year old girl and this is my first story I've eve written. I'm not sure if it's any good but even I'd it's not please tell me because I will change it. I love comments and votes and fans every time i get one i scream. I have one fan, because of my mom, and three votes because of my family. And 2 comments because of myself haha. I need ur help!

  • 911
  • ally
  • ambulance
  • brett
  • calling
  • cancer
  • change
  • death
  • everything
  • friends
  • grandfather
  • heart-ache
  • jennet
  • landy
  • mark
  • nothing
  • pacing
  • upset
Imaginationismylife Imaginationismylife Mar 29, 2012
@Qudratullah To tell you the truth, I am just too lazy! Hahah :P... If I were to start writing a story of some kind, I would start over because I wrote this one a long time ago and it stinks compared to the kind of stuff I write nowadays
Qudratullah Qudratullah Mar 29, 2012
hahaha you shouldn't stop dear.. yup poems are easier but novel writing is very ineteresting
Imaginationismylife Imaginationismylife Mar 29, 2012
@Qudratullah I have given up on this story cuz' i don't like it hahah :D poems are easier!
Qudratullah Qudratullah Mar 29, 2012
that's really nice. please keep writing more.. accept my love and prayers
Imaginationismylife Imaginationismylife Mar 11, 2011
How did u like it!!! I am Joanna the one who wrote the story above. You can tell me to change anything and post the title of ur own stories and I will read them and vote and comment on ur story!!!!! Thx lots!