Eating The Fruit

Eating The Fruit

1K Reads 36 Votes 7 Part Story
Question Mark By 4AGoodReason1717 Updated Mar 14, 2011

Leslie has a mind full of imagination.  She inherited that from her Father, a famous story  writer.  She has, mostly, a normal life.  After her friends leave her and all she is left with is her stories about Georgie, the Witch of Olija.  But in one moment fate drags her into doing the unthinkable: killing everyone she loves.

Kantore Kantore May 09, 2011
This is good! Nice grammar and spelling; I only spotted a couple mistakes. The plot sounds interesting, and your style could definitely take it places. Voted! 
- - May 09, 2011
i've never read a story like this before, which is a good thing :D reading on, voted!
MasqueradeMadness MasqueradeMadness Mar 13, 2011
OMG this is soooo goood! :) dude, you've totally got my vote/fan!
AvengedSevenfoldGirl AvengedSevenfoldGirl Mar 12, 2011
Heyy, I love this" Seriously it has an amazing beginning and a great written style.
                              
                              I am compelled to read on :D - This deserves to be way more popular 
                              *Votes*
FindingANewWayOut FindingANewWayOut Mar 12, 2011
You need to change paragraphs for each new speaker because it confuses most readers if you don't but other than that it was amazing just like the others your an awsome writer! 
Dare2BDifferent Dare2BDifferent Mar 12, 2011
OMG this is soooooo amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Seriously, guys read this! Such a good writer!