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The Burbs

The Burbs

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Mellmo By Mellmo Updated Apr 02, 2011

Moving once again, Sam Carver is thrown into an adventure full of new friends and experiences, with some embarrassment and romance along the way. But she would have never expected the nightmare that is unleashed on her one night while out of her comfort zone. Love, friendship, turmoil, betrayal, heart break and redemption, all enter Sam's new life in her new small town.

SilentWordsSpeakMore SilentWordsSpeakMore Mar 19, 2011
That was interesting. I like her attitude it creates a good character that I can picture. Can't wait to see what happens next. I have a feeling this town will be different. :)
LeighFrankie LeighFrankie Mar 19, 2011
..i like how characterize Sam.. reg the exchange of line between your characters, try telling the reader what each characters felt rather than just plain stairs of dialogue.. :) but all in all..really nice,.. I commented on the last part as well..:)