The photo album

The photo album

196 Reads 11 Votes 1 Part Story
iluvdance117 By iluvdance117 Completed

This poem expresses the life of someone I know. It shows an event that shows a nostalgic hate and also incorporates some ofmy own feelings on the subject.
This poem was also inspired byEminem's poetry, something I wanted to point out to people. He gives me hope in times of misunderstanding, darkness and anger.

Jessdanceaway Jessdanceaway May 13, 2011
I think this is a great way to go about writing a short story. Brilliant. 
                              But the profanities and swear words are too much for me, it kinda tainted the beauty of the story..
iluvdance117 iluvdance117 Mar 16, 2011
@LostWords thx :)
                              @cantthinkofagoodname thx i will :)
                              @NahDeesession omg thx so much
                              tht means so much 2 me :)
                              @Azjalovesyou dankoo very much :)
                              @indifference03 aw danx tht means a lot
NahDeesession NahDeesession Mar 12, 2011
omg this was more than good! Tears were bubblingup in my eyes because i could relate to this :) YOu go! I voted and and i'm fanning and this is gong in my library! :D )):
cantthinkofagoodname cantthinkofagoodname Mar 12, 2011
Yeah, this was really good, and really real, which I like.
                              keep writing :)