State of Mind

State of Mind

1.5K Reads 28 Votes 8 Part Story
Sam By ryder631 Completed

What is a man's breaking point? When does he snap, consumed by rage? As ordinary man Richard Whitfield's life falls apart around him, he struggles to remain in control through a personal journey that will test his friendships, his marriage, and his sanity.

ChapsZN ChapsZN Jun 16, 2011
I am liking this story already, as a law graduate the case has already grabbed me but the dream he had is already is telling me the is a lot to come from this story regrading those dreams. 
                              P.s I do like the casting choices too , look forward to reading more
LaLaLa95 LaLaLa95 Apr 16, 2011
Reminds me of work by Stephen King :D  . Very good beginning. Its a bit slow, but you obviously needed it to be so thats fine.
                              Its good to read something from a guys POV on wattpad haa.
                              Votedd ((:
ryder631 ryder631 Mar 16, 2011
@TKAnez Thanks! There is a small part that focuses on Lily (his wife), but it was important to the story. Other than that, it's all Richard.
ryder631 ryder631 Mar 14, 2011
@Choppy I just googled "lonely sitting man" and it came up. But yeah, I don't know if you'd be able to use that picture, as it would probably be copyrighted. Maybe if you made a note in the story that all the rights go to the anime...
ryder631 ryder631 Mar 14, 2011
@Choppy So far WP is attracting way more, it seems like a larger community than FP. And thanks about the cover! I couldn't figure out how to add any words, but I think that works better, in a way.
Choppy Choppy Mar 13, 2011
@ryder631 ah-ha. so hows the views/comments side of things? So far, in your oppinion, is FP trafficing more readers and getting more of a response? Or is WP? I'm curious to know. 
                              
                              And by the way, love the cover. I think it works really well with your story. :)