Darkened

Darkened

46.9K Reads 2.6K Votes 26 Part Story
Zara Khan By ZaraKhan850 Completed

Highest rank # 26 in fantasy 

In face of a greater danger ,
Two races which have always been thirsty for each others blood are forced to form an Alliance

Castellians (Angel blessed ) And Dragonairs ( Dragon shape shifters)



Meg calve 
 A 17 yr old  leads  a duel life : A  high school student and a Castellian warrior.

She also happens  to be horrible at socializing 
when her family shifts to a new town she couldn't find it in herself to be excited

But the small town has many surprises  for her.
Some good and some that can shatter her world


A fragile Alliance
A forbidden love
A deadly war

Meg had no clue her life would change so much.....

  • action
  • battle
  • blood
  • curse
  • death
  • demons
  • dragons
  • enemy
  • fantasy
  • fiction
  • forbiddenlove
  • love
  • paranormal
  • romance
  • sacrifice
  • shapeshifters
  • teenfiction
  • war
  • wards
  • warriors
It's a very good read so far but many spelling mistakes as if you had wrote and not reread your work to make sure it was legible. So far I am liking the story line though.
Berbear2000 Berbear2000 Jan 21, 2017
It's a very good start so far. The only issue I have is your spelling and your grammar. It makes it very hard to read
Udskudt Udskudt Feb 13, 2017
There have to be space between the '.' and the new sentence. After a '.' The sentence starts with a big letter.
ZaraKhan850 ZaraKhan850 Nov 05, 2016
Thank you. Please do let me know how you find the ending when u are done with the story 😊 !!
Udskudt Udskudt Feb 13, 2017
Hi, I was wondering if you want people to point out mistakes. I don't mean to be offensive, I just want to help ^^
FairySalvatore FairySalvatore Dec 24, 2015
It would not suck... Someone special must be there...*wink wink*