Susie X Reader (Deltarune)*DISCONTINUED*

Susie X Reader (Deltarune)*DISCONTINUED*

9.1K Reads 280 Votes 11 Part Story
TheWildWolf By The_Artsy_WereWolf Updated Dec 31, 2018

Your a really shy and a less talketeve person, but you can speak your mind if needed.

you and Kris are both adopted by Toriel sooo your brother and sister and treat each other like it.

Idk what else...

  • deltarune
  • kris
  • susie
  • xreader
MorseMorder MorseMorder Nov 21, 2018
just saying but * aren't used as quotation  marks.
                              you use either " or '
                              I hope this is useful (and I apologize if this was just a one off punctuation error)
MorseMorder MorseMorder Nov 21, 2018
so a little trick with words that end with ing,
                              if the word ends in an e, you drop the e, and add ing, for for example;
                              Dance, it ends with an e so you replace the e, with ing and it turns into dancing.
The_Artsy_WereWolf The_Artsy_WereWolf Nov 18, 2018
Yeah, I understand what your saying.
                              But I don have. Computer right now and I'm going to eddet my mistakes soon.
                              But for now ill write the story and ill fix evry thing later. That's my motive.
AlishaA131 AlishaA131 Nov 20, 2018
Its a beautiful day outside, birds are singing,  flowers are blooming, on day like these kids like you, should be burning in hell :3
Aqua_Sea_Chan Aqua_Sea_Chan Nov 25, 2018
                              Also, sorry if I'm being too picky, could you please tell the reader when the perspective changes? It went from 2nd person to 1st person. (First person is when the reader is used in the story. You can pick this out by finding keywords such as "I" and "me.")
MorseMorder MorseMorder Nov 21, 2018
nah, Pastel colours really AREN'T my thing XD I'm tanned so they don't look good on me XD