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Pack law

Pack law

158K Reads 1.2K Votes 24 Part Story
kelley By PHalliwel Updated Dec 19, 2011

Caitlyn has the impossible task to raise two little boys. when the alpha of her new pack takes an intrest in her she doesn't react how he wants, will the secrets of her past keep the appart

kaelyn33 kaelyn33 Apr 08, 2012
what caught my eye was the name but its always caitlyn or something along those lines my name is kaelyn so far I've never really met any one who's name is spelled like that
mouris mouris May 12, 2011
heyhey. great story! As always proud off you! I'll try to be as nice as I can, but you've got to work on your gramar if you want to succeed. Love you very much xx
PHalliwel PHalliwel Apr 04, 2011
@secret__crush. please write a story in dutch and i'll correct your grammar, oké? i don't mind being corrected as long as its done nicely. so if it bothers you that much write a NICE comment with what needs to be changed and how i can do it better. 
secret__crush secret__crush Apr 03, 2011
im sorry but your grammar is horrendous. " i putted" and "i learned them" makes me want to smack someone
PHalliwel PHalliwel Apr 01, 2011
@MysteryTakeover82  Got you've got a nice name. And i'm stuck with Kelley. :(:(
MysteryTakeover82 MysteryTakeover82 Apr 01, 2011
This story first caught my eye because Caitlyn is my name. lol Spelled the exact same way too. FINALLY someone uses my name in a book. lol