48 Hours

48 Hours

6K Reads 141 Votes 21 Part Story
RebekahA By RebekahA Completed

A group of teenages battle it out with a rare disease that causes phenomenal changes to a human body that cuts off their senses and their mind.  Will they make it out alive or will they get caught by this disease?

MadisonLee MadisonLee Aug 28, 2011
Love the beginning! It's original. And woah the cliffhanger.. made me want to read on! Love your writing style btw!
xxsweetdreamsxx xxsweetdreamsxx Aug 28, 2011
i love how u started it like a dictionary :)
                              it's sort of a cliffhanger but that just made me wanna read more :))
                              voted! ;)
RebekahA RebekahA Jun 20, 2011
@Griffinclaw thanks so much for the support! But yesss the diary part was definitely what I was aiming for ;D. 
                              @Muahahaxoxo Thank you for keeping to your word for reading :)! I will defs get to that right away xD
Muahahaxoxo Muahahaxoxo Jun 20, 2011
Wow good stuff! Excellent descriptions, love the words used. But maybe you should separate it into two paragraphs :)
Griffinclaw Griffinclaw Jun 20, 2011
I like how you started this. It really reminded me of reading from a dictionary, yet not really a dictionary. :) Like a diary probably! You write really, really well! It's so interesting! Will be reading on to the next chapter! I'm voting
RebekahA RebekahA Jun 20, 2011
Thanks so much for reading!
                              @Ahahheartbahbay I will get to reading yours soon :) but thanks so much for the honest opinion!