The End of the World

The End of the World

290 Reads 12 Votes 2 Part Story
Drew Smith By dasWFL01 Updated Mar 28, 2011

Caden McKayley is the average boy, crushing on girls, going through puberty, leaving old friends behind and making new ones.  However, he comes to realize that he is not all that normal . . . In fact, he is slowly becoming the most powerful human being in the world and has no clue about it.  There are people that are after his secret power and will do anything to obtain it.  Caden's world quickly crumbles when dark forces are thrust upon him, forcing him into something that he never expected: a new dimension.

Sinfael Sinfael Apr 02, 2011
I enjoyed this. Others have mentioned the slight flaw with the long dialogue tags, so I won't go into that. But overall, this was a nice piece of writing and quite enjoyable. Voted. 
daydreamer4life daydreamer4life Mar 20, 2011
I really like the way you wrote this. Um, on page 4 you didn't do much paragrahs and it was hard to read but apart from that, it was great. I voted. And upload soon!!!
dasWFL01 dasWFL01 Mar 18, 2011
@ontheskyline Thank you so much! :)  I know it's only four pages now, but I'm working on it, so it will soon have more.  
ELOHCIAN ELOHCIAN Mar 18, 2011
I really like this so far. Your writing style is very good, and I really hope you continue on with this. It's definitely going in my library. :]