Discovering Paris

Discovering Paris

507 Reads 8 Votes 2 Part Story
Lauren By Pearlywhites Updated Mar 24, 2011

Growing up without a mother is hard on Adair, a young girl in Victorian England.  When it's time for her to come out into society, her father, a travelling salesman, sends her to live with friends in Paris.  In Paris she finds out what it means to truly live, she finds love, deceit, and secrecy.  For Adair, Paris is a whole new world.

Dreaming_Love Dreaming_Love Mar 26, 2011
I really like your description :) It is slow but I understand that you need to set it up.  Hmm...something different about her? I have an idea...but I'll just have to wait and see.  This is good and like I said in the last chapter...it has a lot of potential.
                              
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Dreaming_Love Dreaming_Love Mar 19, 2011
I really like it.. I think that your description is pretty good. I saw a few minor mistakes...but this has definite potential :)) Upload soon!!