Situation 84

Situation 84

533 Reads 14 Votes 10 Part Story
FallenDream By FallenDream Updated Mar 26, 2011

Somewhere in the world of science a new discovery was made. Some Human children had a hidden gene that allowed them to have unimaginable abilities.The scientists wanted to inform the world and use it to their advantage. They contacted a black operations unit director  first, primarily to gain protection and showed their reasearch to him. The director, a bloody thirsty crazy man, became greedy of this news and bought it from them, keeping them for his own personal gain. He trained them harshly and forced them to become killers too. Years later two teenagers, 84 and 72 rise above the rest and are highlighted in the Directors sight. After many years 84 wants to break away from all she has been through and avenge her 'sister' the director killed. She comes up with a plan with her 'friend' Blade and are ready. But what happens when 72 has to hunt them down? Will he join them or kill them for the power and glory he despreatly wants?
These two different teens are mixed up in the world of secrets, guns and black lies tainted with red blood. They are both  willing to risk everything they have for one thing. 
Revenge. Because thats all they have to live for...

LadyAstor LadyAstor May 12, 2011
I love experimenting stories (as in I love yours too) Epic! Very dramatic!
FallenDream FallenDream Mar 27, 2011
@XxamoraXcarolinexX 
                              The numbers are random, but later you will see why they have the numbers... x)
                              and thank you for reading! It means alot :)
leannerosecooper leannerosecooper Mar 15, 2011
That sounds better ;) aww thank you!! Its nearly my name! Yay i will nearly be a character in your story lool :L im gettin a bit exicited XD as you can tell. Yay it is so going to be good!
                              
                              Leannee <3
FallenDream FallenDream Mar 15, 2011
@leannee thanx:) im glad you like it! I will fix the problem 2nite too.and the names are confusing but I have a chart thing that has all the characters I'm using. I will be using more names than numbers depending on who's pov! Im using Lannee because it's an amazing name xD 
leannerosecooper leannerosecooper Mar 15, 2011
Just pick some of your friends names or names that you like. (: 
                              
                              Leannee <3
leannerosecooper leannerosecooper Mar 15, 2011
Heyy, this is really good  but how the hell are you going to remember the numbers and they might get confusing? I liked it, but make it clearer that you are changing points of view as first of all I got confused but it's really good, keep uploading!
                              
                              Voted, Leannee <3