Look Before You Leave

Look Before You Leave

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Question Mark By 4AGoodReason1717 Updated Mar 10, 2011

Love Frame has given up.  Her boyfriend, Kyle, breaks up with her and she gives up on life itself.  What seems to be a night of beer and a late night swim turns into something completely unexpected.  What seems to be a normal life becomes something beyond her imagination.  Love's life was a whole lie.  She wasn't born in this life, but another and was reincarnated.  Love has to find out her real past and discover how special she really is.  When the guy she might love plays with her heart, she has no idea what to do.  As he starts playing games with her life, she wonders if life is worth it at all.

Bloodynewmoon Bloodynewmoon Mar 13, 2011
Very good. My only complaint, which is probably just a peeve, is the extra usage of ellipses (...). Just three looks fine while getting the pause across. 
FindingANewWayOut FindingANewWayOut Mar 11, 2011
Wow! Amazing! I loved it! Can't wait for more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :)