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Ash By missmorbid97 Updated Mar 12, 2011

Some thing is happening to Bree Thornwood, but she doesn't know what. When people start to disappear at the new boarding school,  Lakewood Private school Bree realises that  they haven't just got lost they might have been... murdered.
But why  would someone want to kill a bunch of school kids? What is doing this? Or who.....

MewJounouchi MewJounouchi May 20, 2012
Okay, I read this and I want to know what is going to happen next!! :D And I know you said that you're not good with spelling and grammar. :) I can help you fix this up if you want, just ask anytime. :)
thecoffeekid thecoffeekid Mar 10, 2011
That was AWESOMMMMMMME!!!!! REALLY...... speechlesss
                              Great way to get people to read on :))))
                              I DEFINATELY VOTED*
                              MOREE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! LOls
                              p.s can you please check out my story called All I want to do is Dance, I would really appreciate it. thnx
                              Morrre!!!!!!Sorry Im so demanding