when he came in the house i ran i heard gun shots i covered my eyes then i heard slience......
@Nixie_Pixie lol i know u get annoyed by that but i will just for u xx and thank you
Okay Im going to be a little mean, not that I dont like the poem because it is awesome :)
Can you please add comma's and full stops, also put your I's in captitals :)
I wonder who 'he' is ??
For a first publish this is really really good :)