Nekisha the school nerd is the wife of a Billionaire who is a rockstar. Sold by her stepfather she is kicked out of her house and moved to a huge mansion with her husband to be
My name is nekisha also but spelled Nykiesha, pronounced Nakisha
Not to be mean but it was kinda hard to read with everything not spaced out or in paragraphs but it was good
ok I would have gave her the a$$ whooping of her life and second why is he wearing a tux?
love her confidence and true that never call a black person a nigga if you are whte cause you would be jump by a hole mob of black people
it ok but add more pages in your chapter to make more interesting so more people will read it. i love the stoey line.update soon
Its interesting and im hooked :P but... You oulf use speech marks to make it clearer who is speaking, maybe like this:
"Hey" i said.
"Hiya!" she said.
Just a thought. I love the story line. Update soon? (: