Shadow

Shadow

14 Part Story 47.3K Reads 1.5K Votes
NaTTyKiinz By NaTTyKiinz Completed

Draco Malfoy and Hermione Granger Novel. It's only your shadow filling the room, arriving too late and leaving too soon.

HerInkedWings HerInkedWings Jun 28, 2015 02:19AM
I am not a dromine shipper but I've gotta say, this seems interesting
WendyWrites WendyWrites Nov 01, 2012 05:41PM
Very interesting hook...I actually missed it the first time I read Chapter One. Where you choose to start and end this excerpt works really well to attract readers and get them to read on to see how it comes about and how it all ends. Well done. Voted.
Bauhinia Bauhinia Oct 02, 2012 01:21AM
This is a fantastic way to begin the story! The emotions and descriptions were very realistic, and I'm left wanting to read more! Which is what I'm just about to do now!
StarPaine StarPaine Sep 13, 2012 06:16PM
woooooow..great. I liked your choice of characters. I like them since chilhood.
KshemaKurup KshemaKurup Sep 11, 2012 04:21PM
Interesting..........
                                    I think you picked the perfect scene to draw the reader in. :)
Indigold Indigold Aug 27, 2012 10:19PM
Your trailer is amazing and so is your excerpt..I've never read a harry potter book(watched the movies though..ok please don't give out to me!)but I think I'll really want to read this one!