My Mates with the Enemy Pack

My Mates with the Enemy Pack

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Rhen_Bird By Rhen_Bird Completed

This story is about a girl named Hazel, but she isn't a normal girl. She is a werewolf, the alfas daughter. The pack she is in is called the Winter pack. The pack has a rival pack called the Ozone pack. The packs have been rivals as long as anybody can remember.   Hazels father, Tyron, is very strict and try's to keep his daughter away from everything  bad. Her father knows that she is by far the fastest, most agile, and best fighter in the whole pack, but he still won't let her leave. Hazels dad agrees to let her go out for one day   unsupervised, but that was a mistake. When she gets in the woods she shifts into a pure white wolf. She starts running, but the Ozone pack smells her. They follow her scent to a nearby lake and capture her. She is taken to their pack house, and meets her mate.

Piperish Piperish Jun 26, 2014
Why do you put paragraphs in the middle of a sentence? Why do you even put so many paragraphs?