My world does not have wars. We do not disagree. Our existence is Utopia, until one Abby Dante comes along to ruin it all. Her ideas are far-fetched, wild, impossible. She sees the world differently than the rest of us. I think I love her.
Hey, so I've only read the this chapter, but it sounds amazing! Definitely already one of the better books I have read on here. Also it reminds me a bit of 1984 by George Orwell, but different. Its good, I like it :)
@MRHoag Yeah well, the end is probably not like much you've read, but I agree. It's a pretty obvious plot in some ways.
@YiLinO Thanks! And yup. Definitely an info dump.
Pretty good exposition, though from this intro the characters and plot seem kind of predictable, boy who lived in strict world changed by new strange rebel girl, she teaches him how to see the world differently they fall in love ride off into the sunset blah blah blah...Or maybe not?
@fromtheheartandsoul Thanks!! That means a lot. The hook is sort of a big deal since that's how you go about getting an agent. Hopefully I can master that skill.
I voted before i evn read the actual book because i knew it would be. The prologue/hook and comments were that good :)
I'm interested! Very interested! Good hook, intriguing world. I'm still reading.