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3 Weeks with Kate

3 Weeks with Kate

939 Reads 13 Votes 5 Part Story
Ekaterina By YekaterinaVik Updated Mar 30, 2011

Kate is a varsity swimmer in her Jesuit high school in California. When her parents called it quits and got a divorce 3 years ago she decided to live in sunny California with her dad, but during the summer is forced to live with her mom. Ella, Kate's mother, deciders to move to a small town named Danville. Thinking she would prefer the closeness of the town and also enjoy seeing some of her old friends, because after all that is where she grew up. Kate struggles to get along with her mother especially because they aren't close. Deciding to put the past behind her, Kate reconciles with her best friend and finds love.

RNMurray RNMurray Mar 30, 2011
Awesome story there are a few grammatic errors nothing major. The dialogued flowed smoothly and seem natural. Keep writing.
                              
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xMixim xMixim Mar 30, 2011
Sorry, but this chapter came out confusing, who is Lucas? XD I may have missed that in the first chapter.
                              Also, capitalizing words doesn't really add more effect, some ! would be good, plus the way of how people say it, ex: gasped, shouted, etc.
                              
                              :D Interesting though!
xMixim xMixim Mar 30, 2011
Good first chapter, love the third person writing; haven't seen some in a long time. Some spelling errors, do correct those :) Should be easy to find.