Melanie

Melanie

458 Reads 7 Votes 4 Part Story
kellbell2000 By kellbell2000 Updated Feb 09, 2012

It seems like Melanie is always in the middle of something even if she had nothing to do with it. A lot of the time people don't believe her when she tells the truth, especially her mother. The laziest, bossiest mum of all time. At least Melanie has got her aunt, Tanya, the person she can rely on most. But will auntie Tanya's shoulder be enough for Melanie to cry on when things get a little out of hand?
*An entertaining story that pulls you in!*

kellbell2000 kellbell2000 Feb 02, 2012
@skullphrodite Thanks for voting - i need votes! I am glad you like it, I will try to add more to it as soon as i can! sorry i took long to reply, i hvae had so many things to do!! =D
xlovexme xlovexme Oct 06, 2011
Nice one!!!! I like it, very descriptive. You're a lovely writer!
readalot4 readalot4 Mar 14, 2011
I love how you've Introduced the characters personalities through their actions. The writting structure is very strong, 
                              
                              *Voted*