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The Elf Princess

The Elf Princess

3.9K Reads 62 Votes 11 Part Story
Samantha Prine By SamanthaDarby1 Updated Jun 05, 2014

When your life has been made up before you were even born, would you stick to what you were told?
When everything you knows hangs in the balance, would you risk it all? Just to save the one you love?

In my life I've had to make the hard choices. Never having what I wanted. 
But now... Everything changed.

JoshuaPipkins JoshuaPipkins Apr 09, 2016
Somewhat better. There's still a lot of grammar and pacing issues that should be corrected but otherwise; the story is actually really interesting! See you in chapter 3