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The Empty Box of Valentines

The Empty Box of Valentines

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TortorMad32 By TortorMad32 Updated Mar 09, 2011

Have you ever noticed that some days seem that much longer than others? Well today was one of those days. Krysta Lenton is a nerd, simply put. She is the only one in the whole school who doesn't have a date to the Valentines disco. But that all changed when she gets an empty box of Valentines on her desk with a note syaing 'Will you be my Valentines?'

TortorMad32 TortorMad32 Mar 12, 2011
@Maccagirl thanks glad you like it hoping to upload soon thanka for being my publisher!!:) love yaxxxxxx vx
Maccagirl Maccagirl Mar 12, 2011
Love it so far!!!! You know who this is xx
                              One thing: where you have written "I am kind of a bit of a nerd" It might sound better as "I am a bit of a nerd" 
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TortorMad32 TortorMad32 Mar 09, 2011
First chapter uploaded!! tell me what you think and I I could change anything!!! :)))
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TortorMad32 TortorMad32 Mar 09, 2011
HEY!!! Please tell me if you like my new story !!! This is my first attempt so if I could make any changes that would make it better please tell me!!