Touch of Belle

6 Part Story 1.7K Reads 61 Votes
Emmy By HeyItsEmmy Updated 3 years ago
Belle Gray has a gift, or as she likes to call it, a curse. Ever since she was young, making contact with someone else has been a bad idea. She can’t do anything like a normal girl; she can’t hug or hold hands with anyone in fear of what will happen to them, because from just one touch, she has the power to send that person back in time. Belle has no family, her curse already having marked them, and now she’s destined to never survive love either. Because when she does fall for the guy, her ‘gift’ makes the guy fall too. Yet he’s falling back to a time which she has no choice but to rush to save him from.
@HeyItsEmmy no problem but I will surely vote on every chapter
A prologue would be nice but nevertheless, this is a good start because a lot of things are not explained but still, you had me wanting MORE! Thumbs up for this interesting and well-written work^__^v
Only one chapter and it already intrigues me and makes me want to read more. I love your dialogue and it just seems very interesting because you don't really reveal to much information yet. With other words: Well done and keep writing :3
Oh my ! I just want to find out what the curse is. Write another chapter please.
This is a really great opening chapter, it flows really well and it's impossible not to love Gabriel;) Anyway, great job, voted:)xo
Emily! Danny might be your book crush. But Gabriel is mine! :) I'm in love with him already. You have to keep on writing this. It's truly amazing. And I'm not just saying that because you're my Twinny! <3
                                    From the true and amazing word of you: ZOMG!!