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⚜ 𝔰𝔥𝔞𝔶𝔢 𝔱𝔥𝔢 𝔱𝔢𝔢𝔫𝔞𝔤𝔢 𝔴𝔦𝔱𝔠𝔥 ⚜ By shayebay Updated Dec 22, 2015

Having grown up believing that the Devil is God, Avalon Kandor and the rest of the youth living in the city of Eden spend their teenage years in pursuit of the one thing that matters: the title of a Pure. Awarded upon the completion of their education, it is both expected and an extraordinary honour. But becoming one of the Pure isn't as easy as you would think.

Twice a year, for every year they attend school, the youth of Eden have to sit the Test: an evaluation of their knowledge and belief in God. In the younger years, getting a few questions on the Test wrong is nothing of concern, but upon reaching high school things start getting dangerous. Make a single misstep and you could face Expulsion and life as an impure. Get a wrong answer on the Test and you'll be Removed - permanently.

Avalon knows the risks that accompany disobedience - has experienced them first hand - but when she's told that her world is based on lies, she'll do anything to find out the truth. Even if the truth turns out to be worse than not knowing anything at all. 


© 2014 by shayebay
This novel is entirely a work of fiction. The names, characters and incidents portrayed in it are the work of the author's imagination. Any resemblance to actual persons, living or dead, events or localities is entirely coincidental.  
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  • avalon
  • black
  • dark
  • devil
  • eden
  • evil
  • future
  • god
  • grey
  • heaven
  • hell
  • impure
  • lies
  • magic
  • messiah
  • nephilim
  • powers
  • pure
  • school
  • truth
fabvanshi fabvanshi Nov 24, 2015
How do u even think of such complicated plots? Do u wanna become a writer
Tenwyg Tenwyg Jul 23, 2014
Wow, this sounds really cool! Adding to my library to read when I can :)
despxndency despxndency Jul 10, 2014
this is the first story I've found that has my name and I'm so excited for this and the synopsis sounds really interesting and just holy lord
queen-ue queen-ue Jun 21, 2014
Wow, this is really cool. I've never seen a story like this; a dystopia based around religion. Now I'm interested. ^-^
                              - V.L.