I am the Reincarnation of Helen of Troy

I am the Reincarnation of Helen of Troy

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lifeisamazing411 By lifeisamazing411 Updated Sep 08, 2014

I am Helen of Troy. The reincarnation of her, I mean. I have been rebirthed, along with many others from the trojan war. If I don't find a way to fight my fate, history will again repeat itself and a modern day version of the Trojan war will occur. Along with my guardian, the reincarnation of Penelope, Helen's cousin in her former life, and the love of my life, the reincarnation of Paris, prince of troy, we must fight fate and do the impossible..... prevent history from repeating itself.

swimminginsnow swimminginsnow Sep 24, 2015
I love this prologue. But can you please make the title shorter? It will help readers remember it more easily
lifeisamazing411 lifeisamazing411 Jun 05, 2013
@NUTELLA445 I am also just a beginning writer by the way and your comments did nothing to encourage me to continue.
lifeisamazing411 lifeisamazing411 Jun 05, 2013
@NUTELLA445 wow that was really hurtful and was not helpful at all.
DylanRa3 DylanRa3 Feb 13, 2013
Okay, just one thought. 
                              
                              How about trying a title like, Helen
                              
                              or something that's not like, "Okay, that's a little heavy."
adjppm adjppm Jan 03, 2013
Just happened to notice this title and was thinking, "Helen of Troy Come Again" sounds better to me. To me, maybe not to you. Just a thought.
lifeisamazing411 lifeisamazing411 Jun 16, 2011
@Forbidden_Eternally Thank you so much for checking out the story! I'm glad that you like it!