Burned at the Cross

Burned at the Cross

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_SkySailor By _SkySailor Completed

Alyssa Bell, a witch, had a contract to full fill and she intends on doing it. She has to protect the Shifters, a job that her mother had run away from. Ever since she had left, Alyssa had been working hard as a witch, mastering lots of spells, preparing to be the guard that protected the king of all Shifters. But then she has to deal with the king's son, who was raised around mortals and had no information about his people or anything of the ungodly. But in these times, witches were burned at the cross, making it hard for Alyssa to do her job.
Eamon Price, an ordinary man, who thought that his world was good. Women wanted after him, wealth, and a father who hardly watched over him. He did as he pleased, until he finds out that he's the Prince of the Shifters. He has to learn all sorts of new ways for his people, and for himself; not knowing which world he belongs in.

gerbilsarecool311 gerbilsarecool311 Jan 28, 2012
It's an interesting plot, a little overused, but fresh enough to make it original. I really like it but you seem to be at war with yourself making the narration first or third person.
_SkySailor _SkySailor Oct 06, 2011
@poeticanna12 cool! i wish my name was anastasia!! my real name is molly :P
shelbylw03 shelbylw03 Mar 12, 2011
This is great! Love your details and its extremely well written. And the emotion in it was great.
HeatherMcCorkle HeatherMcCorkle Mar 09, 2011
I enjoyed your writing style. You have a way with imagery and emotion that is hard to come by. I hope you keep writing! 
TheseNewHorizons TheseNewHorizons Mar 09, 2011
Ohhh I loved the end! so spooky :) Mmm actually I loved all of it :)
MoniqueTheRippah MoniqueTheRippah Mar 09, 2011
I enjoyed this very much! It was very intriguing :) At the start I could really see her sadness for burning the very house her and her mother live in :D Good job!