When my father was in the hospital, I visited a Buddhist Temple in Los Padres National Forest. Single-chapter completed story.
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Wow, this is very deep. I can feel the emotion you put into this.
This is so heartfelt and beautiful. I feel the love you have for your father. All of it touched me so deeply. Thank you for sharing a piece of yourself with us.
Thank god he's okay. I was worried for a bit! I really like the action pack. It gives the story a bit of a punch!
I love this place I remember falling off a rock and scraping me nee here, this is really well paced for a short story good job 6.5/10