The billionaire baby

The billionaire baby

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jonathan8 By jonathan8 Updated Nov 08, 2015

Life come unexpected just try and make the best out of it

Aoife103 Aoife103 Jun 20
I don't want to be offensive as I like the idea for the book but it needs serious editing as the grammar is atrocious , I mean this as creative criticism and not to put you down
jonathan8 jonathan8 Jun 18
Please y'all if you don't have anything nice to say then don't leave comment. Thank you for reading my story
The story is moving too fast and too easy for the guy..try to slow down on their contact...
MiaRoseCook MiaRoseCook Jul 07
As a critic I'm gonna say this would be a complete failure as a book. Poorly written, tumbler text and horrible characters.
LydiaCrowsey LydiaCrowsey Jul 12, 2015
u dont have to put her name or the other persons name. when they are talking to each other. just put she said or i said
bookwormsrule0 bookwormsrule0 Oct 21, 2014
That was mean! I understand that he lost his dad at 16 but still don't be rude or mean! Love this writing!