Ms Achille Lauro (not finished)

Ms Achille Lauro (not finished)

562 Reads 19 Votes 2 Part Story
enigma1 By enigma1 Updated Apr 04, 2011

a cruse would be leisurely for most but Charlotte was determined not to go, they should of listened to her...... in  a story of suspense and romance,discover fantasy mixed with a historic event .

enigma1 enigma1 Apr 14, 2011
@ILoveTea i will tomorow!" get ready for a spectacular splendid amazing......failed, but a try at writing more
enigma1 enigma1 Apr 14, 2011
@DearXlovelyXrain thanks, have u got any ideas what do do about the second chapter?
TheBoomStick TheBoomStick Apr 13, 2011
wow i think this has excelent visual. the way you told how the ship looked was amazing and the emotions put into the story. i definitly think you should continue this story. 
enigma1 enigma1 Apr 04, 2011
@BeckiieJayne i just did :) plz vote for the star of chapter 2 x
Louise8995 Louise8995 Apr 04, 2011
please add some more i would like so see how it turns out :)
enigma1 enigma1 Mar 22, 2011
thanx nick, yer i cant spell at all, i swear i'm dyslexic :S