a cruse would be leisurely for most but Charlotte was determined not to go, they should of listened to her...... in a story of suspense and romance,discover fantasy mixed with a historic event .
@ILoveTea i will tomorow!" get ready for a spectacular splendid amazing......failed, but a try at writing more
@DearXlovelyXrain thanks, have u got any ideas what do do about the second chapter?
wow i think this has excelent visual. the way you told how the ship looked was amazing and the emotions put into the story. i definitly think you should continue this story.
@BeckiieJayne i just did :) plz vote for the star of chapter 2 x
please add some more i would like so see how it turns out :)
thanx nick, yer i cant spell at all, i swear i'm dyslexic :S