The Swallow and the Sun

The Swallow and the Sun

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Sarah By MyCatsEvil Completed

This is a short story I wrote for my English coursework. I gave it in 6 months ago and my teacher still hasn't marked it, so I wanted to see what reaction it will get online. It was rushed, and I need a new title. Any ideas? Please comment and rate!

MyCatsEvil MyCatsEvil Mar 11, 2011
@Pixiie Thank you Sophie! And yours definitly trumps mine anyday!!!!
Pixiie Pixiie Mar 10, 2011
OMG! That is amazing. <3 it. So... I dunno no words can describe it. Wow. I would never have guessed what she was. I love it. Mr Whittaker really needs to get his bum in gear and mark it; I feel an A* coming on! :)
                              Well done! So much better than mine! :)
                              xx
                              Sophie xx
MyCatsEvil MyCatsEvil Mar 09, 2011
Yeah, thanks Marta. I will read yours as soon as I can - tommorow! Love you too!
awaken2unbroken awaken2unbroken Mar 09, 2011
heeey :) this is sooo good, even though i've read it before. 
                              Love :D
                              xxx
                              P.S. Mr Whittaker, if you see this, Sarah's not a happy bunny with you not marking this for months >:P