My Sanity

My Sanity

12 Part Story 7.7K Reads 360 Votes
PunkRockLuvr By PunkRockLuvr Updated May 05, 2013

Ever considered suicide? Just leave all the everything in your life behind and end it all? Well, I have, twice. 

Zeriella Ceylontera is a quiet, mysterious girl, depressed for reasons that she doesn't like talking about. She's been having trouble trusting anyone ever since that wretched night, and the walls she built around herself make it impossible for anyone to enter her life. But when he walks into her life she finds her walls crumbling down around her and there's nothing she can do to stop it.

badboyforlife badboyforlife Dec 28, 2012 05:31AM
it really good @PunkRockLuvr  it sounds like that this real life and very good details. love your work <3
ming_ning ming_ning Oct 27, 2012 11:44PM
This is absolutely amazing, great opening, and wonderful plot
makexbelieve makexbelieve Sep 29, 2012 09:12AM
The opening paragraph is really good - especially the first sentence, which really caught my attention. It's a strong way to start.
                              
                              I liked the way you described her family as well, giving us snippets of information about each. The names are really great too.
Amycaaat Amycaaat Sep 14, 2012 03:41PM
Omg, I can relate to this. I mean, I have thought of doing such. And I've been there. Keep it up! Very great job! The introduction was flawless.
ChickNAlfredo ChickNAlfredo Sep 14, 2012 03:27PM
I have to admit that I like the idea, but sometimes you explain too much and the language becomes to much "conversation-ish". Trust your readers! And don't do "(...)"'s.
                              
                              Either way, good job!
That's really sad. This was really well written and a great first chapter. It really makes you want to read the second one! Nice job