The next time you wish for your idol --- Demi Lovato to be your big sister, just remember that I actually live your dream and it's not something you'd want to wish for, it's horrible.
I like it. You seem to know how to write and know the difference between "your" and "you're"
I was actually expecting it to be like most of the boring fanfic stories of Demi but I just finished one chapter and I'm already into it. Nice story
CHELSEY IM SO CONFUSED TEXT ME AND EXPLAIN IT TO ME CAUSE IDK WHO TALKIG DEMI OR MADDI LIKE IM LOST
Most first chapters of stories I've read on this website make me stop and think if it's actually worth reading on. I usually read another chapter or two before I decide. But this, is, amazing! I really loved your first chapter, your ideas and you as a writer.
Isto e novo diferente das outras fics amei posta mais porfavor super louca pra ler mais ;-)
This sounds great so far , It sounds completely different from the other demi fan fics out there