City of Diam

City of Diam

1K Reads 16 Votes 3 Part Story
June By Biminimary Updated Jul 08, 2013

An underwater city surrounded of mysterious creatures that live in this world. Men are full of hatred and the only thing they want is to destroy them. Two worlds that are collapsing they are determining in one thing that will destroy one of them for good.  Avani is looking why they hate them; by looking for an answer she found something unexpected. Could she change the flow of the future or she accepts what is coming.

Biminimary Biminimary Oct 09, 2012
@SamMedina Ok, I haven't check the spelling grammar of the story but thanks for the comment. I will fix them all. ;)
SamMedina SamMedina Sep 28, 2012
There's a typo in your blurb 'if' should be 'is.' 
                              Very, very interesting story, though :)
Biminimary Biminimary Jul 16, 2012
@RedFeather I'm glad you like it. This is Indonesian language is a pretty language although I don't know how to speak it. I am trying to add some words to the story, let see how it works. Feel free to correct me whenever you want. ;)
RedFeather RedFeather Jul 16, 2012
That's cool! Diam means quiet or silence in my language! And all the little phrases are in my language too, or sort of.
Biminimary Biminimary Jul 10, 2012
@sailboat Thanks I will try to get better and improve my writing. I'm glad you like it.
Biminimary Biminimary Jul 10, 2012
@likeabedofroses Thank You! You know that my characters names are from Indonesia so you can Google it if you liked so much.   =)