You want to know what it's about, read!
@Hrtsmom: I know, I keep meaning to fix it but I haven't found the time!
I think I would like to read this but the extreme run-on sentences drive me nuts!
really good so far... but how are 5yr olds supposed 2 kno about revenge??, but anyways gd story, cnt wait 2 read mre :)
plooping? I think you mean plopping x]
Okay my opinion would be: Space out some stuff to make it like you have paragraphs because it looks like a big blob of text but I love your use of imagery. Beautiful. ;)
You have my vote! x]
This is a really good chapter. upload again as soon as possible. I am going to become your fan because you made me curious to find out what happens next.
@vicky_nfs Thank you for telling me about that, I didn;t notice it before :) With luck Ch. 1 will be up around Thrusday or Friday.