What Happens in Malibu, Stay's in Malibu

What Happens in Malibu, Stay's in Malibu

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jarzy6931 By jarzy6931 Updated Mar 23, 2011

Logan is 17 years old and is a junior in High School. Since she's a junior she gets to go on spring break. Spring break is almost always held in Malibu. When she gets there things seem great, she's meets many nice guys. She also thinks she's in love with her brother Jaydens best friends that he meet a year ealier. But when she goes into town, things take a drastic turn. What will happen to Logan? Will she ever find out if she's in love with her brothers best friend? Will things get better...or even worse for her? Find out in my first stroy.

deka3246 deka3246 Mar 18, 2011
Hmm, good for a first story, would you mind a critique? Just let me know if you would, I may not be able to get to it first thing though, lots of college work and such. 
                              
                              ~Kadia