The In Between (paused)

The In Between (paused)

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you are such a stalker! By pitcher99 Updated Mar 07, 2011

When a girl named Mary falls through a hole in a tree, she doesn't know what had happened to her. Some spirits take her with them and told her that she had to find the bewitched creations in order to survive. How will this story turn out. Will the girl die............ or will the enemy. How will she escape the in between.

- - Mar 31, 2011
I like the storyline you're making. It's very unique, but almost like Alice in wonderland don't you think. But good job, it was nicely done. 
KAFrak KAFrak Mar 08, 2011
Yeah, I thought it was really well written. THe formatting was pretty
                              
                              pst, check out my story titled, "I Love You Baby"
ErinJM ErinJM Mar 07, 2011
As I've said before it's good. You know you can vote for it yourself.