Final Cross

Final Cross

31 Reads 4 Votes 5 Part Story
Anne B. Caitlin By AnneBreeCaitlin Updated Oct 05, 2018

While at a Christmas party with his family, Zavior's parents are captured by the party guards, along with nearly all the other partyers. He barely manages to escape with his four-year-old sister. On the way, he discovers something much larger than a simple party trap. 
Who are these mall guards, and why did they kidnap his parents? Can he rescue his parents and reunite his family? How will he know who to trust?

Final Cross was my NNWM novel last year. I will warn you, it is the first draft. I have corrected the very obvious spelling errors, but not much more. Once I finish writing the story, I will rewrite and re-upload it.
Please let me know what you think in the comments below! And if you spot an error or have a question, please (politely) notify me in the comments (either in-line where the error is or in the regular comments with directions to where the error is). Thank you!
Enjoy!