Radio Waves

Radio Waves

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DJ Ferris - SciFi Writer and Generally Nice Person By PrincessDeixa Completed

A stranger on the bus is carrying an old radio. The girl watching him cannot help but follow him to his destination where she finds others with the same old radio waiting. For what? For who?

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“He held out to receive it despite her objection.” 
                              
                              How rude.
What are their wives thinking? 😬 Like, if they just up and went with this radio, what do their wives think?
This sentence is pretty long, though this may just be my opinion.  😂
“What is it...” I think you may have to switch the “is it” to be “it is” because I kept reading it as that but went back because I knew it was wrong. Not sure, though. 😅
“She hadn’t heard him say the words her mind was considering.” I can infer what this means, but others may not. Maybe it needs a word, to be rewritten, or perhaps, just a comma?
Invited or called? Because it seems like they didn’t have a choice 😂