This is simple poem with a single question, "Why do we suffer?"
@Amuse-bouche Thank you Mindy; i am suprise at the attention this little poem has produced and perhaps it is because it asks the big question. LPF, Olan
I enjoyed the life and spirit of this quiet piece! You ask the big questions Olan...
@Rhymer2 Thanks for the marathon reads of my work. I posted this earlier but for the at sign, smile. You'd think I would learn this feature after a while, eh?
Maybe the question is not why do we suffer? More as what is in us to overcome? Before I act as a wild horse in your right and gallop too far beyond the ridge of my own mind, great write Olan with strong questions that lure your readers in and make them one with the write
The beating of the hooves of the horsemen, you point out an important part of christianity. It rains on the just as well as the unjust, our treasures are not built or guaranteed in this realm of reality but in the one being prepared. Excellent piece Olan.
@Warrior_Prophet Thank you, WP, for you comment but I doubt you want my brain, lol, it is old and worn out.