Raisinheart

Raisinheart

26 Reads 4 Votes 3 Part Story
Tom Lichtenberg By tomlichtenberg Completed

Three stories of a lonely youth. Jimmy Kruzel's bad luck is that his worst enemies are always his best friends, or is it the other way around, and that sometimes his darkest hours seem to come right after the dawn. In tales more bitter than sweet, Jimmy finds that you can attract more flies with honey than you can with vinegar, but really, who wants to attract flies anyway?

  • coming-of-age
  • short-story
  • shortstories
  • stories
  • teens
SamanthaSLK SamanthaSLK Mar 05, 2015
I like the humour  sprinkled throughout. It keeps things vibrant.  I really like the characters and all their quirky little traits, made me smile more than a couple of times.
SamanthaSLK SamanthaSLK Mar 05, 2015
@tomlichtenberg Seemless prose that captured my attention and held my curiosity throughout.  I especially like the dynamics of the relationship between the two boys - friend and enemy at the same time.  It really is a fascinating story so far.