Uncrowned: A New Elysium Story

Uncrowned: A New Elysium Story

70 Reads 7 Votes 2 Part Story
BrightStar By Red_Leasia Updated an hour ago

Hannah is a Vesper pilot, one of the most advanced augmented human beings in existence. She thought she was bringing her family honor until the day she steps foot on the surface of a world she was ordered to destroy. 

Every idea that Hannah had about honor is destroyed in settling dust of New Caledonia. As she swears that she'll never do this, she's swept up in the Purge as it tears her world apart.

  • action
  • adventure
  • androids
  • cyborg
  • newelysium
  • scifi
  • space
  • ái
taivaan_sininen taivaan_sininen 42 minutes ago
it is so exciting to see the early days of the Purge from different perspectives!! I'll have to start collecting ideas for Cyril' s story as well...
taivaan_sininen taivaan_sininen an hour ago
oh I imagine it is rough for her. back on Neo-Tokyo shed be seen as less worthy. but outside of Neo-tokyo her heritage would be a kind of stigma as well. she doesn't have a place in either world.
Post a full story,not just one chapter
                              You bother your readers to begin reading and then nothing else?
                              
                              
                              .one chapter storys make me mad
It is so unusual to read of Ember as "Hannah"! But I am really looking forward to learning more about her past, and her relationship with her family before the events of NE1!
"not one she was used to feeling"?
                              or "not one she was used to"/"not one familiar to her"?
I almost regret asking you to be more graphic in your description, but you did such a good job to build a horrific atmosphere... so I guess I got what I wished for and won't complain! On the contrary. Good job!