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bëllä By wolfbell Completed

Olivia has been abused by her brother all her life, and she has the bruises and burns to show it. 

When she makes a stand and moves out, she meets a boy; a wonderful boy. 

But the two boys, brother and lover, are connected, and Olivia is scared. 

Scared of the brother's hate, and afraid of the boy's love.

DebraHilleyYork DebraHilleyYork Oct 25, 2016
If you can't trust family then who can you  trust, he's a monster
cremedelaoreo cremedelaoreo Oct 16, 2014
Ooh, this was a nice chapter.  I can't believe it's actually her brother!  I loved the way you closed it by using figurative language.  There were mild errors- surely typos- and the commas were misused as well.  Despite these issues, I enjoyed another chapter of Bruises :)
_Mad_Tyke_ _Mad_Tyke_ Oct 11, 2014
NOOO way!!! I didn't even guess... I just assumed it was a family member