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XXXheartnetXXX By XXXheartnetXXX Updated Jul 29, 2012

Please read my first story!!!

This is about Reika Yuzuki a popular, intelligent, beautiful and timid student that afraid to open up with  other people because of CERTAIN REASONS and  Ryo Shinichi also a popular student that describe as a handsome, cool, tough, mature guy by the female students in the campus, but the truth he is a.........

what will happen with this two???

please read,review/comment. vote my story.... thanks :)

I accept criticisms,but please don't be too harsh with your words... thanks :D

READ!!READ!!REVIEW!!REVIEW!!COMMENT!!COMMENT!!VOTE!!VOTE!!

imymeaxia imymeaxia Jul 28, 2012
haha pero mas mabait ako pag tulog ^^.. yea ALL HAIL OTAKU !!
XXXheartnetXXX XXXheartnetXXX Jul 28, 2012
@axiao8 ,,, hahaah parang ako lng pala hehhe pag busog mabait kpag gutom ang imanit ng ulo?? xD  yeah ALL HAIL OTAKUS!!!
imymeaxia imymeaxia Jul 28, 2012
@cynical_cupid08 busog kasi :)) haha ska supporter ng mga fellow otaku ^^
XXXheartnetXXX XXXheartnetXXX Jul 17, 2012
@axiao8 ,, ayus lang po yun,, mas natutuwa nga po ako pag  may nagsasabi ng criticisms nila sa writing ko , in that way po ma-iimprove ko po yung pagsulat ko ng story,, heheh.. thanks po sa pagread and comment dun sa story :) paki vote na lang din po kung nagustuhan niyo...
                              
                              THANKS PO ULIT!!! :D
imymeaxia imymeaxia Jul 17, 2012
ah,,,
                              for criticism ha... no offense...gusto cu lang mag improve ka...
                              cguro...
                              a.. e..
                               wag masyado ipaulit ulit ung sentence.. yun ung tinatawag na redundancy sa writings.. ^^..
                              
                              interesting ung story :D parehas kmeng hate ang p.e :D write more !
XXXheartnetXXX XXXheartnetXXX Jul 08, 2012
@LalineMejia ,, thanks for criticism,,.. na-edit ko na po yung prologue hindi na po siya hiwa-hiwalay :D and thanks din po sa pag-read nung story at pag-like... i hope that you will support my story till the end of it   :D