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4 Part Story 1.8K Reads 51 Votes
XXXheartnetXXX By XXXheartnetXXX Updated Jul 29, 2012

Please read my first story!!!
    
    This is about Reika Yuzuki a popular, intelligent, beautiful and timid student that afraid to open up with  other people because of CERTAIN REASONS and  Ryo Shinichi also a popular student that describe as a handsome, cool, tough, mature guy by the female students in the campus, but the truth he is a.........
    
    what will happen with this two???
    
    please read,review/comment. vote my story.... thanks :)
    
    I accept criticisms,but please don't be too harsh with your words... thanks :D
    
    READ!!READ!!REVIEW!!REVIEW!!COMMENT!!COMMENT!!VOTE!!VOTE!!

imymeaxia imymeaxia Jul 28, 2012 03:14PM
haha pero mas mabait ako pag tulog ^^.. yea ALL HAIL OTAKU !!
XXXheartnetXXX XXXheartnetXXX Jul 28, 2012 03:01PM
@axiao8 ,,, hahaah parang ako lng pala hehhe pag busog mabait kpag gutom ang imanit ng ulo?? xD  yeah ALL HAIL OTAKUS!!!
imymeaxia imymeaxia Jul 28, 2012 02:56PM
@cynical_cupid08 busog kasi :)) haha ska supporter ng mga fellow otaku ^^
XXXheartnetXXX XXXheartnetXXX Jul 17, 2012 03:24PM
@axiao8 ,, ayus lang po yun,, mas natutuwa nga po ako pag  may nagsasabi ng criticisms nila sa writing ko , in that way po ma-iimprove ko po yung pagsulat ko ng story,, heheh.. thanks po sa pagread and comment dun sa story :) paki vote na lang din po kung nagustuhan niyo...
                                    
                                    THANKS PO ULIT!!! :D
imymeaxia imymeaxia Jul 17, 2012 03:10PM
ah,,,
                                    for criticism ha... no offense...gusto cu lang mag improve ka...
                                    cguro...
                                    a.. e..
                                     wag masyado ipaulit ulit ung sentence.. yun ung tinatawag na redundancy sa writings.. ^^..
                                    
                                    interesting ung story :D parehas kmeng hate ang p.e :D write more !
XXXheartnetXXX XXXheartnetXXX Jul 08, 2012 02:49AM
@LalineMejia ,, thanks for criticism,,.. na-edit ko na po yung prologue hindi na po siya hiwa-hiwalay :D and thanks din po sa pag-read nung story at pag-like... i hope that you will support my story till the end of it   :D