Mine [BoyxBoy]

Mine [BoyxBoy]

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Yvonne By xLostDreams Updated Jul 18, 2013

ln a small town named Chamerbells, there stood a boy, Xavier Vinson, he was just now any other boy but he's social rejected, unpopular and a nerd. He had his best friend, Licia and his family, they were only ones that knew Xavier was gay, yes he isn't open yet. Nothing really in his life was interesting, adventurous until three new students came into his life, two boy and one girl. And he would never thought that three of them were werewolves and one named Avery Vale claiming that Xavier was his mate. What will happen to Xavier's life? Will he fight through the whole journey just for his mate, Avery?

Shipsailrgramerpirat Shipsailrgramerpirat Jul 27, 2017
Lol
                              *on
                              Not "that", " that" doesn't make grammatical sense.
                              Don't hate me
Shipsailrgramerpirat Shipsailrgramerpirat Jul 27, 2017
I forgive you if you forgive my impulsing need to correct 50% of any mistakes I see.
Shipsailrgramerpirat Shipsailrgramerpirat Jul 27, 2017
And jeez, that's why she would rape you? I'd call that being jelly.
Peace200215 Peace200215 Oct 15, 2017
Every time he said he pushes his glasses back I do the same thing
Shipsailrgramerpirat Shipsailrgramerpirat Jul 27, 2017
Is it mean if I point out the extra "who"?
                              Yes?
                              OK, I'll go now.
iceprince99 iceprince99 May 16, 2017
"Tomorrow there was a test" I don't get this point.. Tomorrow is a future word, are you trying to say that "tomorrow there is a test" ?