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Elorviel By Elorviel Completed

The world exists in multiple dimensions, and somehow we've managed to travel into an overlapping dimension that brings mankind closer to solving the unknown.  Purgatory is a world-wide operation funded by each country to protect humanity from the disasters that inhabit the overlapping dimension, but they do so at a great cost.  No one in Purgatory chooses to be there, but everyone in Purgatory is there for a reason.

Helena never cared for the life she had until it was taken from her.  With the drive to get her life back, she works her way through the ranks of Purgatory, only to delve deeper into the twisted nature of the program, and uncovers secrets that could cost her life or be used as leverage.  In this new and unfamiliar realm, will Helena be able to find what she is searching for?

TorissaNikole TorissaNikole Sep 05, 2014
Hmm...makes me think that this society tends to be more sexist towards guys than girls. Interesting.
fckinghealy fckinghealy Oct 09, 2012
I love the descriptions! The imagery is spot on. I can practically sense everything. I feel like the character. It's very weird. I also like Eden's personality. Keep it up.
Harlum_X Harlum_X Aug 05, 2012
First, i didn't find any grammar errors which is great! And i can tell by this that you're a very talented writer with some mad skills! I really like your character, Helena and the way you just described everything was just beautiful! Great beginning!
actresswriter24 actresswriter24 Aug 05, 2012
it took me half a sentence to say "yep, I'm in". Read the rest of the first paragraph and was in love! lol. It didn't take long and I'm VERY hard to impress early on (:
kissing-in-neverland kissing-in-neverland Jul 31, 2012
This was very unique and original. I liked the way that you write. You have a great vocabulary. For your rating I would have to say that I would give you a 4 out of 5 (amazing)
Elorviel Elorviel Jul 31, 2012
@gabbyalex I'm glad you enjoyed it so far!  If you ever decide to continue reading, do let me know if you find any mistakes and let me know what you think!  :)  I enjoy getting honest feedback!